Message no. 318
Posted by Dr. Suellyn Winkle on Wednesday, April 9, 2003 2:02pm
Subject Questions for Class Discussion
1. Choose three of the images McMurtry uses in hisessay and analyze them. 2. McMurtry states that one difference between war andfootball "is that there is little or no protest againstfootball." What is his reasoning here? 3. McMurtry suggests that the idea of the "romanticcombatant" is a myth. Describe this myth in terms ofsports, business, and war.
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Posted by ANNE C BAATSTAD on Wednesday, April 9, 2003 3:03pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
1. Choose three of the images McMurtry uses in his essayand analyze them. The first image that caught my eye was when McMurtryspeaks of playing football on the grass as a youngchild. "I loved the game from the moment that I couldrun with the ball. PLayed shoeless on a green open fieldwith no one keeping score and in a spirit of recklessabandon and laughter, it's a very different sport.Almost no one gets hurt and it's rugged, open andexciting" (324). These are days prior to torn ligaments, "kills" andhundreds of various injuries. Why can't football be"rugged, open and exciting" without the viciousness andbrutality? Even football players in the NFL themselveswould enjoy this sport better, despite the fansdisapproval... why do they care so much? Is it worthbeing a wheelchair unable to shower or batheindependently to get a few cheers out of the crowd forknocking the opponent out of this world? ...On injuries... "(I remember being so taped up incollege that I earned the nickname "mummy.") The termthat survives this merry-go-round spectacle of skilledmasochism with the fewest incapcitating injuries usuallywins. It is a sort of victory by ordeal: "We hurt themmore than they hurt us." (324) This just continues the point that football has oneobjective: Injure as best you can, put them out of thegame, the season on the career field as much aspossible. The "we hurt them more than they hurt us" issuch a murderous and tyrannical mindset. It's like anarmy general telling his troops "I know that there's 19left from our original 200, and it may seem hopeless,but we're hurting them something awful, so keep at itand I'll sit back and cheer ya on. Good luck!" Yearight. "The doctor in the local hospital said three weeks rest,the coach said scrimage in two days. Three days later Iwas back home reading philosophy." (327) Tyrants. All coaches are this type: no nonsense, thegame is your life, they pay you millions so your minorcuts and bruises (which are actually shattered bones andherniated discs) are worth it, and it's fun to hurtother people - so get out there and do it! Isn't it acoincidence that McMurtry thought all these things aboutfootball, probably never let a peep of it out during hiscareer, and when he retires he enters a profession ofPHILOSOPHY??? Hmmm... 2. McMurtry states that one difference between war andfootball "is that there is little or no protest againstfootball." What is his reasoning here? What McMurtry means in this statement is that peopleall alike (soldiers or citizens) will either support orprotest war. In football, the players do not protest oreven merely complain. If you complain, you're a"chicken" (328) and not meant to play 3. McMurtry suggests that the idea of the "romanticcombatant" is a myth. Describe this myth in terms ofsports, business, and war. In sports, business and war, one wants to defeat allodds and will attempt to crush anything in the way, evenif it means taking hits and injuries along the way. Youfight for the outcome, to win. A business man will buyout or crush competing businesses to get to the top. Afootball player will ramsack his opposing quarterback,take out his knee and put him in a coma to cripple theteam and lead his own to a victorious Superbowl. Asoldier will shoot down, capture and most likely killthe enemy in order to win the war and go home alive andvictorious. In most cases, these defeaters don't botherthinking of the opponent, or they at least don't like toadmit to it. Afterall, it's about winning, isn't it?What is our world coming to?
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Posted by MELISSA M RIVELL on Wednesday, April 9, 2003 3:10pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
Good points, Anne! I agree with you on them, in fact, Ithink you said what I was trying to say better than Idid!! So thank you!! ~Melissa~
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Posted by MELISSA M RIVELL on Wednesday, April 9, 2003 3:06pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
1. Choose three of the images McMurtry uses in hisessay and analyze them. McMurty frequently refers to his personal experiences toexemplify his point on how accepted brutality is infootball. For example, he remembers a coach scolding himfor not further hurting an already “helpless” player onthe ground. Another time, he tackles a player with a badknee and was “reproved for not exploiting theopportunity to unhinge his bad knee” (324). Both ofthese examples demonstrate the “We hurt them more thanthey hurt us” (324) mentality of football. McMurty thenreminds us of the results of such brutal behavior byrelaying to us the extent of his physical injuries inthe second paragraph of 325 (there are a lot okay, andI’m not going to quote them all!). Such a massive amountof injuries is “the real currency of the sport” (325).McMurty presents the mentality of football with personalexamples. 2. McMurtry states that one difference between war andfootball "is that there is little or no protest againstfootball." What is his reasoning here? McMurty says “that there is little or no protest againstfootball” because the spectators enjoy watching theplayers inflict injuries upon one another. They actuallycheer, and at the worst injuries. McMurty later explainsthat the acceptance of “brutal practices” such as “‘impersonal acceptance of inflicted injury’; anoverriding ‘organizational goal’; the ‘ability to turnoneself on and off’; and being, above all ‘out to win’are of ‘inestimable value’ to big corporations”(326).McMurty pulled these quotations from a Harvard study,proving that football is not the only area that humanbeings accept such aggressive behaviors. McMurty alsoadds the example of human beings spending their lives“manufacturing, selling and using weapons that tearopponents to pieces” (326). His point is that societyaccepts the brutality of football because it hasrepeatedly accepted the brutality in other areas of ourlives for years and years. Football and business haverules and are regulated, but the inherent brutality ofman prevails. Man attempts to regulate his warlikeactions but only makes them worse. Okay, so that’s areally depressing point. 3. McMurtry suggests that the idea of the "romanticcombatant" is a myth. Describe this myth in terms ofsports, business, and war. In terms of all these areas, the romantic combatant mythappears in the athlete’s/businessperson’s/soldier’schallenge to win the game/win the profit/win the battleusing “We hurt them more than they hurt us” (324)strategy. The person who can defeat their opponentsafter enduring their own injuries while inflictingdebilitating injuries on the enemy deserves to be and isthe winner, the most profitable, the champion. Butsomeone always has to come out the loser. It’s a viciouscycle people!!
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Posted by MELISSA M RIVELL on Wednesday, April 9, 2003 3:20pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
I just wanted to add something to my whole message: I ama synchronized swimmer and I have witnessed some of thismentality even in my sport. There are teams thatpractice relentlessly, with coaches yelling andscreaming and ignoring their athletes' injuries just sothey can keep their #1 title, their high scores, etc. Aspecific example: At one of my Zone meets, there was ateam in the team warm up that we were sharing our warmup time with, and one of the swimmers was in obvioulsyhorrendous physical pain but the coach was stillallowing her to swim, even though she had to be helpedoff to the side. Another example: My friend from our oldColorado team moved to Texas to swim for a varsity teamcoached by a former Olympian who would treat themhorribly one moment and be great the next. One of herteammates became so stressed out that her stomach ispermanetly in ruins; it cannot be fixed. She wasrecommended to quit by her doctor! A good coach has toremember to keep the athletes' welfare in sight as wellas winning. And another point, many of the teams thatdid so well would ask our team(smaller and not assuccessful in the big picture of winning Nationalchampionships)if we still had fun! They were not havingfun! We told them yes we do, and they remembered whenthey were younger and still having fun! These are younggirls, only 18 or 19 at the most!! Okay I just wanted to share with everyone an example ofhow this does not only apply in sports likefootball...and let me tell you, synchronized swimming isa contact sport!! I would go into detail, but Ican't...I could talk about synchronized swimming forhours on end.
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Posted by SELENA EDWARDS RIESS on Thursday, April 10, 2003 9:47am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
Wow, Melissa, I didn't realize that swimming was thatinvolved. Out of all the sports there are out there, Iwould have thought swimming would be the better one. Thanks for sharing this. I actually used swimming as anexample in my class discussion, but I didn't realize atthe time that it was so competitive. Selena Riess :o)
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Posted by ANNE C BAATSTAD on Monday, April 21, 2003 1:18pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
Melissa, I like that you added that bit in on synchronizedswimming. You really helped emphasize the point that notall sports are out to be fun or easy, and your sport isprobably the best example. I know lots of people whoassume that sych. swimming is nothing but slow, gracefulmovement and smiles that couldn't be harder than gettingout of bed in the morning. That's simply not true. Likeyou said, it's a sport full of aggression, competition,and tons of hard work - like any other. Before readingMcMurty's article on football, I assumed the NFL is madeup of a group of rough men who LIKE to try to kill eachother and relish the paralysis of the opponent. Now Isee that many probably don't like the game for itspresent objectives, but for the actual game itself. Thesport. ~Anne
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Posted by ANGELA-ROSE MANESS on Thursday, April 10, 2003 1:49am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
Melissa, I think that you did an excellent job ofmaking a clear and precise point about McMurtry's essay. I like the quotes that you chose to include in yourresponse and think that they are very appropriate forthe questions asked. I especially liked your statementof "the inherent brutality of man prevails" in responseto question two, and I like how you added a little bitof personality to your answers: "Okay, so that's areally depressing point." Good job! ---------Angela
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Posted by NATALIE A PETERS on Wednesday, April 9, 2003 3:09pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
1. Choose three of the images McMurtry uses in his essayand analyze them. An image that sticks out in my mindis the one McMurtry uses when he talks about thepost-game activities. He says, “After every game, ofcourse, the papers are full of reports on the day’sinjuries, a sort of post-battle ‘body count’” (324). Aseasily as it is to think of players going back to thelocker rooms to get bandaged and taped up, you caneasily compare this picture to a real post-battle scene.Pictures of war time hospitals overcrowded with victimsand service people, each just trying to nurse their owninjury and make it out to truly “battle” the next day,along with the reports to the highest ranking officialsto tell them the day’s casualties and overall outcomesof the day’s work easily compare to a post game lockerroom. The overall idea of the author having to continuouslyplay the game, after being substantially injured is onethat makes me sick. “And progressively and inexorably,as I moved through high school, college and pro leagues,my body was dismantled. Piece by piece” (325). Going outto play with a broken jaw (“Bad wisdom tooth”) (325),playing on a shoulder because it “couldn’t be damagedanymore” (325) and regular torn ligaments, and stillbeing expected to keep playing proves what McMurtrysays, “I had learned that physical injury giving it andtaking it- is the real currency of the sport” (325). Asthe essay is titled, I can imagine the coaches saying,“Kill ‘Em! Crush ‘Em! Eat ‘Em Raw!” But really, they aretalking about their own players, not those on theopposing team. The last image that stuck in my head is when he says,“The most savage attacks, after all, are, by generalagreement, the most efficient and worthy players of all.(The biggest applause I ever received as a footballplayer occurred when I ran over people or slammed themso hard they couldn’t get up)” (327). I never want tosee another anti-war protester again. Only if that warprotester swears that they have never clapped when theysee a fight in hockey, or screamed when their favoriteplayer makes a huge tackle or when Tom Glavine hitsChipper Jones in the ninth inning. What’s the differencereally? Well a couple million dollars, the uniform andthe meaning behind their actions. But that’s nothingreally. Players are still getting injured and fans arestill cheering. How is that different from soldiersgetting injured in war?? (Ok, ok, ok… this is a stretch. I had something going.Don’t take me seriously.) 2. McMurtry states that one difference between war andfootball "is that there is little or no protest againstfootball." What is his reasoning here? See my last paragraph of question #1. People will always cheer when fights break out or peoplegetting knocked out, it’s the ways of the game. No oneprotests that the 300-pound defensive end shouldn’t hitthe 180-pound quarterback so hard he can’t get his ownbreath back. But in war, someone will always have toruin all the “fun.” 3. McMurtry suggests that the idea of the "romanticcombatant" is a myth. Describe this myth in terms ofsports, business, and war. “The claim that men like seriously to battle one anotherto some sort of finish is a myth. It only enduresbecause it wears one of the oldest and mostpropagandized of masks- the romantic combatant” (326). I think that if players, businessmen and war soldiersweren’t driven to “compete” by coaches, money orgovernment officials and affairs, maybe they would go alittle easier on their opponents. Ok, like in sports, ifthese players weren’t competing for million dollarcontracts and sponsorships, they might be a little lessinclined to mutilate their opponents to make the “Playof the Day” on Sportcenter. In business, competition maynot be as cutthroat if our society would take some ofthe focus off having as much money as possible. In war,I see things a little different. Call me a republican ifyou wish, but I see this “competition” as completelydifferent. If countries have reasons to go to war thatone leader refuses to settle diplomatically and theyhold a threat to other nations, well then, war is thelast resort. I don’t think anyone in battle wants to bethere, but they are because it was used as a lastresort. I don’t think leaders wished for the outcome,but the didn’t have another choice. People don’t go intowar simply to kill people; they go to war to achievediplomatic points that have no alternative.
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Posted by MARK DEVALIANT on Wednesday, April 9, 2003 10:41pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
1. The first and most glaring image for me is thecomparison of football to war. Whilst watching a gameit is easy to pick out the very aspects that McMurtrypoints out. "To grasp some of the more conspicuoussimilarities between football and war, it is instructiveto listen to the imperatives most frequently issued tothe players by their coaches...." (323) Who couldn'ttell when Spurrier was at his most rankled when he wouldtear the ever present visor from his head. That beingsaid I think the comparison belittles the seriousness ofwar. Put simply, war is not a game. Right now hundredsof thousands of men and women are in harm's way. Theycertainly don't see the rewards that a fotball playerdoes, even at college level. The second image that grabbed my attention was of thewalking wounded. "After every game...a sort ofpost-battle "body count" and the respective teams go twork with doctors, trainers, tape, whirlpool baths,cortisone and morphine to patch and deaden wounds beforethe next game" (324) It shows a resilient bunch ofdedicated athletes. Dedicated but obviously not totheir future. McMurtry even expinds on the number ofathletes that, at some point in their post athleticcareer, end up with some debilitating condition. The third image that I find compelling is of McMurtry asa boy. "Played shoeless on a green open field with noone keeping score and in a spirit of reckless abandonand laughter..." (324) Who can't remember the days whenwe did things just for the pure joy of doing them? Whendid life become so mundane, so driven. Where did thefun go? 2. I'm not sure of McMurtry's reasoning for there beingno protests against the injurious nature of football. Perhaps it's because "it's just a game". People want tosee these players come unglued, hurt each other. Whowould protest a spectacle like that? After all, it'sthe American way. It's interesting to note thatMcMurtry mentions a decorated war hero and anex-president. These people are the ones that were soprotested against (witness the Vietnam War), yet theywere so fond of using terms from a game that seems justas bloodthirsty as the wars they were waging. 3. The "romantic combatant" is the fearless warrior herothat goes forth to rid the world of evil, shield andarmor shining in the early morning sunlight, to rescuethe fair maiden and win her heart. How is this seen inbusiness, in sports? The Saville Row suit (of armoragainst the unfashionable), the brief case (shield)going forth the battle the evils of Wall Street. Makemore money, you get the girl. Wear the uniform, run thedrills, march onto the field of conflict. Gladiatorialcombat, to once again win the hearts of the maidens, ofall the crowd. Slaughter your foe, for he is the veryface of evil, not a person at all. Win the game, getmore money, you get the girl. In war? The hero in waris the guy that sticks with his buddies, even againstthe odds. He's the guy that runs out under fire torescue a comrade that's been wounded, without a secondthought for himself. He's the guy that stands watchagainst the enemies of the nation, because that is whathe has been trained to do, that is what the governmenttells him to do (after all, they know best, right?). Most of these guys have families. They won't make themoney, they won't get the girl.
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Posted by SELENA EDWARDS RIESS on Thursday, April 10, 2003 9:57am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
I like the comparisons you made in Question #3. It'samazing how one, the businessman, may end up with moneyand the girl, yet the soldier who ultimately ends up thehero is the family man probably scraping to make endsmeet. The real hero, the soldier, doesn't get any creditexcept for doing what the government has asked him to dofor his country. As you pointed out, the governmentshould know best no questions asked, much like the coachof a sport team or boss of a major corporation. Great post! Selena Riess :o)
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Posted by ANGELA-ROSE MANESS on Thursday, April 10, 2003 1:40am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
In John McMurtry's insightful essay titled "Kill 'Em!Crush 'Em! Eat 'Em Raw!," many powerful images are givento illustrate the intense similarity between war andfootball. All of the images of war and football thatMcMurtry presents bear equal intensity about therepulsive truth. In the beginning of the essay,McMurtry states, "Just as in hockey, where a fight willbring fans to their feet more often than a skillfulplay, so in football the mouth waters most of all forthe really crippling block or tackle. For the kill." He goes on to say, "Thus the good temas are 'hungry,'the best players are 'mean,' and 'casualties' are asmuch a part of the game as they are of war" (323). Fromthis image, one can only picture the disgustingbrutality that prevails as enjoyment in football. Thisbrutality is so similar to the brutality in war that itis frightening. McMurtry brings out the hidden truthabout what football is really about and what fans reallyseek in watching it. When someone is hurt or becomes acasualty of football, the mouths of fans water witheagerness to see more. This is what McMurtry issuggesting, which is what also seems to be theunderlying truth about the sport. When McMurtry talksabout how casualties are "as much a part of the game asthey are of a war," the reader is smacked in the facewith a vicious reality. When this reality is seen, thereader is left with the sick notion that most Americansdisregard the injuries and casualties of football whileregarding the injuries and casualties of war with moreimportance. The fact of the matter is that we shouldlook at war, football, and any other sport or activitythat involves casualties as similar activities withsimilar consequences. McMurtry suggests that footballis just like war, yet it is even worse in one aspect: itinvolves fighting between the people of our country,just like a civil war. After reading this essay, itseems that Americans need to reevaluate their values andtendencies in order to produce a more civil society. Further on in the essay, McMurtry says, "After everygame, of course, the papers are full of reports on theday's injuries, a sort of post-battle 'body count,' andthe respective teams go to work with doctors andtrainers, tape, whirlpool baths, cortisone and morphineto patch and deaden the wounds before the next game"(324). This statement is sickening to picture. Thisshows that football is really about the brutality at theexpense of the players. It also shows the similaritybetween football and war. Just as in war, a "bodycount" is taken and reported in the media to catch theattention of and hopefully attract any ambivalent fansto the game of football. The poor players have tosacrifice their bodies and suppress their emotions inorder to perform their duties as players. Later on inthe story, McMurtry writes, "What organized football didto me was make me suppress my natural urges andre-empress them in an alienating, vicious form. Spontaneous desires for free bodily exuberance andfraterniztion with competitors were shamed and forcedunder...and in their place were demanded armoredmechanical moves and cool hatred of all opposition"(326). This suppression is another unhealthy factor inthe destruction of each player's body. Suppression ofemotions never leads to anything good, and in fact,feelings of hostility have a high correlation with heartdisease and many other diseases of the body. Because ofthe tension that arises from this suppression, players'lives and attitudes are greatly affected from football,which is also similar to how a soldier's life isaffected by war atrocities. Just as McMurtrysuggests, there is no real protest against football. People disregard its consequences and view it as just agame between two teams striving for the same goal. Theydo not see the horrible side of the game that playersface everyday. They only see or take into account thepretty side of the game when evaluating itsdestructiveness. The "romantic combatant" myth is aprevailing perspective that can be seen in sports,business, and war. This myth has been around for solong and is so commonly held among individuals that itprobably won't diminish in the near future. In war, thehero always seems to be the toughest man who can holdhis ground and protect the security of others. This iswhat soldiers seem to strive for and is how this mythapplies to engagement of war. In business, the personwho can fight off the most competitors and who can savehis company from being destroyed is usually the toughestand most respected man in that company. Since this manis rewarded with promotions and congratulations fromcolleagues, this is the attitude that business men liketo take. In sports, the player that is the toughest andcan contribute to the team's victory by successfullyscoring goals or assisting teammates is rewarded withthe most recognition and special treatment. Theserewards attract the players to play the role of the"romantic combatant."
Message no. 326[Branch from no. 318]
Posted by ANGELA-ROSE MANESS on Thursday, April 10, 2003 1:41am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
In John McMurtry's insightful essay titled "Kill 'Em!Crush 'Em! Eat 'Em Raw!," many powerful images are givento illustrate the intense similarity between war andfootball. All of the images of war and football thatMcMurtry presents bear equal intensity about therepulsive truth. In the beginning of the essay,McMurtry states, "Just as in hockey, where a fight willbring fans to their feet more often than a skillfulplay, so in football the mouth waters most of all forthe really crippling block or tackle. For the kill." He goes on to say, "Thus the good temas are 'hungry,'the best players are 'mean,' and 'casualties' are asmuch a part of the game as they are of war" (323). Fromthis image, one can only picture the disgustingbrutality that prevails as enjoyment in football. Thisbrutality is so similar to the brutality in war that itis frightening. McMurtry brings out the hidden truthabout what football is really about and what fans reallyseek in watching it. When someone is hurt or becomes acasualty of football, the mouths of fans water witheagerness to see more. This is what McMurtry issuggesting, which is what also seems to be theunderlying truth about the sport. When McMurtry talksabout how casualties are "as much a part of the game asthey are of a war," the reader is smacked in the facewith a vicious reality. When this reality is seen, thereader is left with the sick notion that most Americansdisregard the injuries and casualties of football whileregarding the injuries and casualties of war with moreimportance. The fact of the matter is that we shouldlook at war, football, and any other sport or activitythat involves casualties as similar activities withsimilar consequences. McMurtry suggests that footballis just like war, yet it is even worse in one aspect: itinvolves fighting between the people of our country,just like a civil war. After reading this essay, itseems that Americans need to reevaluate their values andtendencies in order to produce a more civil society. Further on in the essay, McMurtry says, "After everygame, of course, the papers are full of reports on theday's injuries, a sort of post-battle 'body count,' andthe respective teams go to work with doctors andtrainers, tape, whirlpool baths, cortisone and morphineto patch and deaden the wounds before the next game"(324). This statement is sickening to picture. Thisshows that football is really about the brutality at theexpense of the players. It also shows the similaritybetween football and war. Just as in war, a "bodycount" is taken and reported in the media to catch theattention of and hopefully attract any ambivalent fansto the game of football. The poor players have tosacrifice their bodies and suppress their emotions inorder to perform their duties as players. Later on inthe story, McMurtry writes, "What organized football didto me was make me suppress my natural urges andre-empress them in an alienating, vicious form. Spontaneous desires for free bodily exuberance andfraterniztion with competitors were shamed and forcedunder...and in their place were demanded armoredmechanical moves and cool hatred of all opposition"(326). This suppression is another unhealthy factor inthe destruction of each player's body. Suppression ofemotions never leads to anything good, and in fact,feelings of hostility have a high correlation with heartdisease and many other diseases of the body. Because ofthe tension that arises from this suppression, players'lives and attitudes are greatly affected from football,which is also similar to how a soldier's life isaffected by war atrocities. Just as McMurtrysuggests, there is no real protest against football. People disregard its consequences and view it as just agame between two teams striving for the same goal. Theydo not see the horrible side of the game that playersface everyday. They only see or take into account thepretty side of the game when evaluating itsdestructiveness. The "romantic combatant" myth is aprevailing perspective that can be seen in sports,business, and war. This myth has been around for solong and is so commonly held among individuals that itprobably won't diminish in the near future. In war, thehero always seems to be the toughest man who can holdhis ground and protect the security of others. This iswhat soldiers seem to strive for and is how this mythapplies to engagement of war. In business, the personwho can fight off the most competitors and who can savehis company from being destroyed is usually the toughestand most respected man in that company. Since this manis rewarded with promotions and congratulations fromcolleagues, this is the attitude that business men liketo take. In sports, the player that is the toughest andcan contribute to the team's victory by successfullyscoring goals or assisting teammates is rewarded withthe most recognition and special treatment. Theserewards attract the players to play the role of the"romantic combatant."
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Posted by ANGELA-ROSE MANESS on Thursday, April 10, 2003 1:43am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
My bad. I posted my response twice since I thought thatit didn't go through the first time. Sorry ------Angela
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Posted by SELENA EDWARDS RIESS on Thursday, April 10, 2003 9:40am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
1) McMurtry refers to football as “a sport in whichbody wreckage is one of the leading conventions” (323). This brings to mind a picture of a junkyard filled withwrecked, mangled cars stacked on top of one another,with little or no use left in them anymore. In a sense,a football player receives numerous injuries, and whenthe coaches or owners decide that player is no longer ofuse to them, they trade him or force him into earlyretirement. “The real currency of the sport” (325)alludes to money and its relation to football, not“physical injury” (325). In essence, a player’s marketvalue is based on how well that particular player isable to tackle an opposing player and avoid injury, nothow well that particular player may play the game. Justthe thought "that body shattering is the very point offootball" (323) makes one shudder with the idea that abody can be broken into millions of little pieces, muchlike a mirror shatters when dropped. The body is morefragile than we want to believe it to be. It seems thatthe fans who enjoy watching football, the coaches, andeven the players tend to forget this while in the midstof the game, cheering and urging on those great playsand tackles. 2) McMurtry reasons “that there is little or no protestagainst football” (324) since it evokes excitement inthe fans, “not concern” (324) to witness such a“systematic infliction of injuries” (324). If this samesystem of injury were to be put in a differentenvironment, like a music concert or even another sportsuch as swimming, then there wouldn’t be such “acollective rejoicing and euphoria” (324). I've seenthis excitement, as I'm sure most of us have, at highschool football games. I don't know how many times I'vewatched my son and his friends jump up from a greattackle and "high five" each other for bringing theopposing player down as the coaches pat them on theirhelmets for a job well done. Even the crowd, yes, I'mguilty too, stands up, cheering at the top of theirlungs and are especially loud if it results in atouchdown for our team. McMurtry even refers to footballas a “spectacle”(324), which brings to mind a type ofperformance similar to a circus act or play, or somesimilar type of production. Whenever there is a Fridaynight home game for the Trenton Tigers, it seems likethe whole town of Trenton turns out to watch what theyhope will be an exciting game. If one thinks about it,football is boosted constantly during the season withvarious ads and commercials that add to a slow, growingexcitement for fans so they can get ready for the gameof all games, “Super Bowl.” 3) I'm not really sure, but to me a "romanticcombatant" brings to mind some type of warrior or herothat fights till the end for a cause. Essentially, insports the players give it their all, winning or losing,with or without injuries, in order to come out on top towin a coveted title, SEC, NCAA, or Super Bowl champs. Likewise, in war the soldiers fight and defend theircountry with the hope of toppling the opposing country'smonarchy or government in order to rule that country,not taking into consideration the lives that are taken. A businessman seeks to be number one in a business,working his way up the ladder, sometimes not giving asecond thought to the people that helped him, or mayhave been in his way, as he climbed to reach that toprung. How he runs his business will be determined bythe struggle he fought to get there.
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Posted by MARK DEVALIANT on Thursday, April 10, 2003 11:00am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
It has occurred to me that the simliarities between thelanguage of sports and the language of war may not behappenstance. What if people use those words to describe sports justto lend weight to their words, to give them authority,clarity, importance, impetus. No-one would deny thatwar is a serious business, wouldn't that lend credenceto a sporting event? A unfortunate natural side effectof war are casualties. If one were in the frame of mindto refer to sport in a warlike manner, would it then besuch an outlandish notion to accept the casualties ofsport? This post was not in reply to anyone particularly. Itseems that this discussion has evoked some fairly strongopinion/emotion in me.
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Posted by JOSHUA DANIEL COWAN on Monday, April 14, 2003 2:24pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
Indeed. Although the modicum of outdated language andideas rather ired me(in the essay). I played football. A lot. While I must say there are still remnants of the"Kill 'em, Crush 'em, Eat 'em Raw!" generation(my highschool coach was one of them:-\), coaches and teams andI would say the sport has drastically since the 1970's. Guys are penalized for helmet-to-helmet hits, and thestrive is for more personal and team excellence than forthe butalization of another human being. Taking outanother guys' knees in no longer considered something tocheer for, but the last resort of a coward and the signof an inferior player. However, the game by no meanshas lost it's macho culture or the primative means bywhich it comes. It's just evolved.
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Posted by KELLY ANNE PURCELL on Thursday, April 10, 2003 3:02pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
1.In the first two paragraphs, McMurtry describes hishospital stay after realizing that he had acuteherniation. The images that this short story put in myhead are very real, as a family member has had similarproblems. McMurtry stated, "So I spent my Christmasholidays in the hospital in heavy traction and much ofthe next three months with my neck in brace." (323). These are pretty heavy injuries, very painful as well,and were caused by his career in football. "I started off with torn ligaments in my knee at 13."(325). McMurtry goes on to describe multiple injuriesthat he sustained throughout his game days. I amsurprised he can even move. It is amazing that thesemen are even allowed to continue on after so muchdismemberment! "In the United States, for example, the game results in15 to 20 deaths a year and about 50,000 major operationson knees alone." (323) This seems unreal to me, becausehow many football players are there in the NFL? I mean,all the players would be having knee surgery every year! No wonder a players career is so short. Maybe that'sone reason their contracts are so big, in case theycannot move to do anything a few years down the road. Oh yeah, and medical bills. 2. There is no protest to football, there is protest forwar, and they are very similar activities. It is reallya bit hipocritical, but in all reality fatal casualtiesare much less in the game of football as compared towar. Football and war are a lot alike in that theiremployees choose to work, neither are required ofanyone, employees in both professions get paid, and theyall know the risks involved. I understand from the reding that McMurtry believes thatfootball is as violent as war, and if one is protested,so should be the other. I must say that I disgaree inthat they are both as violent as one another. 1."The claim that men like seriousley to battle oneanother to some sort of finish is a myth." (326). Interms of many genres of sports, this idea is not a myth. For instance, does not football involve serious,destructive battle in order to bear a champion, "[... awarrior game with a warrior ethos[...]" (325). The media sure can stake claim and bank in on this myth,especially on Superbowl Sunday. Business can be relatedin the money made on the romantic combatant sports. There is a more up front idea involving business though,the stock exchange for example. A stockbroker fights tothe death almost everyday, battling hundreds of otherbrokers, trying to make the biggest buck. I am notsure, but it seems to me that a career in stocks andbonds would be highly, highly stressful, to the point ofphysical breakdown. War is literally men battling each other and one alwayscomes out a winner. I definitely do not agree with McMurtry that this ideais a myth. I do agree that regulation could help instopping a lot of the violence on the streets. Men haveit rough because of that 'bad boy' expectancy.
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Posted by JOSHUA DANIEL COWAN on Thursday, April 10, 2003 7:40pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
1. Images abound in this piece. Three that come tomind are words he uses to describe the plays that aremost enthusiastically applauded by fans, "smeared","broken in two" and "crucified". The first gives thereader a sense that a player has just been hit andspread over the field like jam over bread. Thinlyspread. The second renders the vision of a board ofsome sort or perhaps a pencil being obliterated into twopieces by means of brute force. The third comes with areligious meaning, of one being hung up on a cross, andusually unjustly and without cause, as Jesus was in theBible. All three of these images when analyzed giveemotional steam to McMurtry's arguement that football isa needlessly and overly violent sport perpetrateduselessly for the sole purpose of entertainment at thedetrement of the players. 2.There is no little or no protest against footballbecause, as McMurtry reasons, "...the game has a life ofits own. Everyone grows up inside it, accepts it andfulfills it dictates as obediently as helots...Thechoice is made straightfoward. Either you, too, do yourvery utmost to efficiently smash and be smashed, or youadmit incompetence or cowardice and quit." Humans, bynature, wish to be part of a group, and to be ostracizedbecause of your beliefs takes more courage than most ofus have. This is why so many blindly follow withoutthinking. Whether it be pro-football or anti-war,people don't want to be left out. Some might not see itthis way, but I believe that this is the underlyingreasoning behind his entire arguement. 3. The romantic combatant is one that pervades everysociety. In ancient Rome they hailed the gladiators asas celebrities, champions, and sport heroes. Yetoutside the colesseum they were ostracized for what theywere-slaves, ex-soldiers and criminals who killed for aliving. In business, there is the ruthless wall street"shark". His business ehtics are nowhere to be found,and he will go around over, under, or through anyone whogets between him and the top. He is heralded as"ambitious" or a "go-getter". He is depicted as a tall,handsome, suave gentleman, when more than likely, hispersonal ethics are just as corrupt as his businessones. The sports hero is no better. Case-in-point: O.J. Simpson. Need I really say more about him?? Thewar hero is the worst most most heart-wrenching. "G.I.Johnny"- coming back home to his all-american apple-piegirl who has been waiting for him patiently while he wasaway doing his part for "Uncle Sam" to rid the world ofthe "commie scum", and they live happily ever after. More than likely, "G.I. Johnny" comes home to amarried-with-children girl who just couldn't wait andspends the rest of his homeless, sleepless nights tryingin vain to forget the images of all the faces that werekilled-no matter the side they were on, while the restof America that heralded as this hero only a few shortyears before now wants nothing to do with him. The onlysolace he gets is from sleeping under the names of thosehe knew until he is shuffled off by some cop as "justanother bum". This has to be the worst case of the"romantic combatant", as the reality is at the disparateend of the spectrum from the myth. And nobody cares.
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Posted by DANIEL T TOTEV on Thursday, April 17, 2003 11:47am
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
1. “It [football] is a sport in which body wreckage isone of the leading conventions” /323/. “Body wreckage”is one of the central images in John McMurty’s “Kill‘Em! Crush ‘Em! Eat ‘Em Raw!” When McMurty became afootball player, he thought that this game was made forshowing and using skills. Unfortunately, both fans andcoaches encouraged players to be mean rather than toshow good technique: “a fight will bring fans to theirfeet more often than a skillful play” /323/. “The mostsavage attackers, after all, are, by general agreement,the most efficient and worthy players of all (thebiggest applause I ever received as a football playeroccurred hen I ran over people or slammed them so hardthey couldn’t get up)” /327/. McMurty reproachespeople’s desire for “body shuttering”. It seems thatmost of the audience is not aware what sits behind allthe images used in football: “field general,” “longbomb,” “blitz,” “front line”; they are not aware whatcomes after a the “crippling block and tackle” in thisgame which original purpose was not to take lives away.They seem not to care about all the players suffering“acute herniation”, “crumpled” disks and bones, and theydon’t seem to be aware of that “the game results in 15to 20 deaths a year and about 50,000 major operations onknees” /323/. 2. McMurty reproaches the cruelty and destruction infootball, but what he most loathes is the fact thatthere is no protest against this brutality andobliteration. How can people protest against war andnobody oppose the malice coming from this game? Theconsequences of wars and football are the same: we havemaimed people and we have casualties. Even they both usethe same terminology. I think the answer has to do withmen’s personality and the norms created by our society.Our society has its basic requirements for men: theyhave to be brave and tough, and they must be able tohandle anything. If you don’t comply with the norms, youare rejected. And here comes the ego of men, which keepsthem doing things that can get them killed. The fearfrom being mocked at is enough for them to be“sacrificed”. The fear that people would call him“chicken” or “coward,” kept McMurtry himself infootball, despite “acute heniation” and the fact that hehad so many injuries that he came up with the nickname“mummy”. 3. “The claim that men like seriously to battle oneanother to some sort of finish is a myth. It onlyendures because it wears one of the oldest and mostpropagandized of masks – the romantic combatant” /326/.According to me, “the romantic combatant” is a warriorwho possesses superpowers or a man whose physical andmental qualities are closest to this perfect warrior.People feel insecure: they may worry about the safety oftheir family, they might be afraid about their countrybeing attacked by another; or they are anxious that theymight get fired. This insecurity can be foundeverywhere. As a result, one tiny part of all humanswill long for this warrior who can protect their family,their country, or who can guarantee that they won’t befired. But this warrior is an illusion and people lookfor the person who is most like this warrior.Unfortunately, they mostly encourage one quality takenfrom “the romantic combatant” and that is meanness.
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Posted by ANNE C BAATSTAD on Monday, April 21, 2003 1:13pm
Subject Re: Questions for Class Discussion
Daniel, I wanted to commend you on your eloquent abilities. Iassume that English is your second language, but you putus all to shame! I especially liked your response thethe first question. Overall, great job!! ~Anne